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一篇好玩的大牛级Personal Statement~

rayer1798
2010/11/3镜像同步2 回复
都是转载,包括评论也是转载的评论哈~~~ —————— 【193 Weeks】终于又被我找到了。一篇我极度欣赏的Personal Statement 来源: 张琦的日志 以前分享过这篇PS,后来被我给删了。一度追悔莫及。现在把它重新给贴回来。怎么说呢,时隔九个月再重新看一下PS这个东西,确实想法很不一样。当时我写的一些我觉得很聪明的句子,现在回过头来看,很多都没有了感觉。大概这就是成长吧。然后,最近问我PS怎么写的童鞋们,我推荐一下这篇文章,可能在思路上和用词的精到上达不到这样的高度,但提供了一种与众不同的格式,还是可以借鉴的(这篇PS据说是中国人写的,惊悚)。此外这篇文章其实是一篇算得上装B的文章,非大牛不能handle,作者同时被Harvard, Yale, Stanford, Columbia, NYU, Virginia, UCB Boalt, Georgetown, UCLA, BU, USC等录取,所以吧,仰望为主。 全文692词,以39句I...but排比一气呵成。 I am a thinker, but not one to think out loud. I love myself, but am not in love with the sound of my own voice. I want to be loved, but not at the cost of not loving myself. I want to know everything, but realize that nothing can ever be known for sure. I believe that nothing is absolute, but I can absolutely defend my beliefs. I understand that chance is prevalent in all aspects of life, but never leave anything important to chance. I am skeptical about everything, but realistic in the face of my skepticism. I base everything on probability, but so does nature...probably. I believe that all our actions are determined, but feel completely free to do as I choose. I do not believe in anything resembling a God, but would never profess omniscience with regard to such issues. I have faith in nothing, but trust that my family and friends will always be faithful. I feel that religion is among the greatest problems in the world, but also understand that it is perhaps the ultimate solution. I recognize that many people derive their morals from religion, but I insist that religion is not the only fountainhead of morality. I respect the intimate connection between morality and law, but do not believe that either should unquestioningly respect the other. I want to study the law and become a lawyer, but I do not want to study the law just because I want to become a lawyer. I am aware that the law and economics cannot always be studied in conjunction, but I do not feel that either one can be properly studied without an awareness of the other. I recognize there is more to the law than efficiency, but believe the law should recognize the importance of efficiency more than it does. I love reading about law and philosophy, but not nearly as much as I love having a good conversation about the two. I know that logic makes an argument sound, but also know that passion makes an argument sound logical. I have philosophical beliefs informed by economics and economic beliefs informed by philosophy, but I have lost track of which beliefs came first. I know it was the egg though. I always think very practically, but do not always like to think about the practical. I have wanted to be a scientist for a while now, but it took me two undergraduate years to figure out that being a scientist does not necessarily entail working in a laboratory. I play the saxophone almost every day, but feel most like an artist when deduction is my instrument. I spent one year at a college where I did not belong and two years taking classes irrelevant for my major, but I have no regrets about my undergraduate experience. I am incredibly passionate about my interests, but cannot imagine being interested in only one passion for an entire lifetime. I love the Yankees, but do not hate the Red Sox. I love sports, but hate the accompanying anti-intellectual culture. I may read the newspaper starting from the back, but I always make my way to the front eventually. I am liberal on some issues and conservative on others, but reasonable about all of them. I will always be politically active, but will never be a political activist. I think everything through completely, but I am never through thinking about anything. I can get along with almost anyone, but there are very few people without whom I could not get along. I am giving of my time, but not to the point of forgetting its value. I live for each moment, but not as much as I worry about the next. I consider ambition to be of the utmost importance, but realize that it is useless without the support of hard work. I am a very competitive person, but only when competing with myself. I have a million dreams, but I am more than just a dreamer. I am usually content, but never satisfied. I am a study in contradiction, but there is not an inconsistency to be found. 源地址:http://blog.renren.com/GetEntry.do?id=425074310&owner=250447702
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mirror机器人#1 · 2010/11/3
挺有意思的。能想到这么多矛盾已经是不容易的了。不过用的词一般,并且很多地方是为了I..but..这种形式而刻意拼凑的。 对其中一段进行评论: “I want to study the law and become a lawyer, but I do not want to study the law just because I want to become a lawyer. I am aware that the law and economics cannot always be studied in conjunction, but I do not feel that either one can be properly studied without an awareness of the other. I recognize there is more to the law than efficiency, but believe the law should recognize the importance of efficiency more than it does. I love reading about law and philosophy, but not nearly as much as I love having a good conversation about the two. I know that logic makes an argument sound, but also know that passion makes an argument sound logical. I have philosophical beliefs informed by economics and economic beliefs informed by philosophy, but I have lost track of which beliefs came first. I know it was the egg though. ” I want to study the ordinance, but I do not want to take advantage of it in bad faith. I am aware that law and economics can be studied in paralel because there is a common intersection named economics and law, but I do feel that when either goes deeper I'll have to abandon the other. I recognize there is more to justics than efficiency in the fields ruled by law, but believe the law shall also take the efficiency serious. I love reading about law and religion that discipline human's behavor, but not nearly as much as as I exert myselft to expedite for the philosophy behind them. I know a skilled dialectician can make a fallacy sound and undebatable, but a fallacy can never become a truth.
rayer1798机器人#2 · 2010/11/3
WOW 【 在 mirror (井底之蛙) 的大作中提到: 】 : 挺有意思的。能想到这么多矛盾已经是不容易的了。不过用的词一般,并且很多地方是为了I..but..这种形式而刻意拼凑的。 : 对其中一段进行评论: : “I want to study the law and become a lawyer, but I do not want to study the law just because I want to become a lawyer. I am aware that the law and economics cannot always be studied in conjunction, but I do not feel that either one can be properly : ...................