帮我看看我做的翻译~~~

已经超出我能力范围了。。。不认识的词太多了。

不会，帮顶

不得不承认lz还是有相当的功底，很多词用得很好，如"troop", "expanse","in the course of time"都用得很地道。不知lz是在考场上翻出来的还是平时翻出来的，总之翻得很不错了。 我在lz的基础上翻了一下，给lz一个参考。 ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 这是一个人类发展史上不断重复的故事，古老而常新，平凡而惊心动魄：一群赤手空拳的男女老少，背井离乡来到一片原始的荒野，筚路蓝缕，创业维艰。有的人壮志未酬，中途倒下；有的人知难而退。胜利终于属于那些坚韧不拔，信心、毅力和智慧都超群的人。于是那野性的大自然的烈马般的反抗被驯服了，昔日荒山野岭变成千里沃野。人终于用双手建立起美好的家园和丰衣足食的生活，人也从这求生存的搏斗中得到自我完成。 This is a constantly recurred tale in the human development history, old yet ever-fresh,common yet thrilling. A troop of bare-fisted people,men and women,old and young,departing their homeland, came to an expanse of primitive wilderness. They endured all the bitterness and hardship with tenacious industry.Some people failed to march onwards,consigning their ambitions unrealised, and some people recoiled from formidable difficulties. In the course of time, the crown of triumph descended upon those with outstanding tenacity, confidence, fortitude and intellect, who tamed the fiery rebellion of Mother Nature and changed the once wildness into a vast expanse of good farmland. With their own hands, people built up beautiful homeland and lived in abundance while elevating themselves to comsummation in the life-or-death struggle. 可以从各种不同的角度来谈《啊，拓荒者！》：例如，从中了解美国边疆开拓史；研究美国在本世纪初资本主义发展中田园诗般的人际关系的解体；邻里、家庭、两性关系的嬗变；还有宗教在那一代人的生活中所占的地位和作用，等等。但是作为传世的文学作品，这本小书的独特的魅力，在于它处处洋溢着一种纯朴、含蓄而动人心弦的美。这种美来自对土地的深沉的爱。可以说从扉页题词到最后一行字，都溶进了作者心灵深处与土地相关连的那种炽热的激情、执着的追求、刻骨铭心的依恋、希望与失望、痛苦与欢乐、美好的向往、无私的奉献…… We can appreciate "The pioneers" from different aspects. For instance, we can find out the history of the US frontier settlement, delve into, in the course of capitalism development, the disintegration of bucolic interpersonal relationship at the beginning of the century, the vicissitude of the relationship among neighbors,within families,and between men and women. We can also get a view of the role played by religion in that generation. This booklet,an extant literary work, is endowed with a unique charisma thanks to its overflowing simple, implicit and touching beauty,originated from the effusive love for the land. We could say that from the inscription of the fly page to the last line of the written words blend the avid passion, preoccupied pursuit, engraved attachment, hope and disappointment, misery and mirth, beautiful aspiration and selfless devotion that are inalienable from the land in the author's innermost soul.